ANZAC Writing

WALT: Retell the story of ANZAC Day in our own words using description and detail.
I learned that in the war the Turks versed the New Zealanders.
Here are two of my best sentences:The Australian soldiers began the attack before dawn. It was very dark when the attack started so the boats got mixed up.
I achieved my goal because I finished the piece of writing.
Next time I will get it done faster.